英文添削結果を受け取りました【英会話を電話、携帯、スマホ、スカイプで トークライン】

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4月22日投稿の添削結果を受け取りました。正しい英文を書くのは難しいことを実感しますがその内添削箇所ゼロとなるように努力したいと思います。

 

An inmate received a letter from his wife. She was asking him when she should plant potatoes in their family garden.  The planting process flashed across his mind.  The first step was to cultivate the hard soil, making it soft so that the roots could easily spread out.  This was hard work, and he was sure that his wife was helpless at this kind of thing.  Asking someone to do it would cost a lot.  Now that he was in prison, they had no income at all.  Wasn’t there a way to have his garden cultivated without paying?  Those thoughts whirled through his mind, and he came across a bright idea.

 

He wrote back. “Do not, under any circumstances, dig up our old garden spot.  That’s where I buried all my guns.”

 

Within days, his wife wrote back, “Six investigators came to the house. They dug up every square inch of the back yard.”

 

It was exactly the result of the plot he had engineered. He knew that the police were looking for his guns to confiscate them.  And it was common knowledge among the inmates that all prison mail passes through censors.  His idea was that if he gave the police wrong information that all his guns were buried in his garden, they would dig up the place.  The information was written ostensibly in the form of a reply to his wife, but the censors, as he had expected, relayed the information to the police who, also as he had expected, sent investigators to the garden and thoroughly dug it up.  Thus, he successfully had his garden cultivated using the tax payer’s money instead of doing essentially the same thing at his own expense.